My School
I studied in Sk Simpang Lima. My school headmaster is Dzulkifli bin Jamhari. I like to study with my teacher and i like to eat at the school canteen because the food is so delicious. My favourite teacher is Puan Ruzi bin Bero. She taught me subject Bahasa Melayu and i like her because she is a good and a nice teacher. The environment of my school is peaceful and clean. School is a place for me to get a knowledge and if i did not come to school, i will not be a smart and clever student. I also have a lot of friends and i play with them in Pendidikan Jasmani time. The Pendidikan Jasmani teacher always plan a good activities for the whole class and it can make us healthy. In Pendidikan Seni subject, i can play with water colour. In my school, there is many cute and nice cats and i like to play with them. My favourite subjects is BM, BI, Science and Mathematics. I want to score 5A's in UPSR next year.
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